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I forgot to be a child,
with numbers and with words.
I never screamed to break the silence,
I never cried til I was warm.
When I was born, I sat straight-faced,
or slept in discontent.
My mother was a patriot,
my father paid the rent,
my brothers bred in violence,
my sisters swallowed swords,
I just laid in paint and uttered nonsense words.
I made up brand new numbers,
I saw the seven signs,
I never played pretend,
and I liked to stand in lines.
I heard them call my name,
and imagined I had none.
I just sat in silence,
as your quiet, simple son.
©2007-2009 ~ShadowNewMoon
:iconshadownewmoon:

Author's Comments

I have drawings. they just suck. and i've packed up all my art stuff, anyways. i haven't brought home anything from school yet, and it's all really big, anyways.

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:iconpiecesofeternity:
Very deep. I like it much.
:iconthe-lady-blue:
I like it a lot. It's very... deep, I guess. For lack of a better word. The rythm is really what captured me. Great job. Sad-ish.

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1 in 4 women will be abused in their lifetime.
:iconthe-lady-blue:
I like it a lot. It's very... deep, I guess. For lack of a better word. The rythm is really what captured me. Great job. Sad-ish.

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1 in 4 women will be abused in their lifetime.
:iconshadownewmoon:
thank you :D

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B: Is it raining?
A: I think they're spitting at us.
:iconshadownewmoon:
thank you

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B: Is it raining?
A: I think they're spitting at us.
:iconthe-lady-blue:
You're welcome

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1 in 4 women will be abused in their lifetime.
:iconbunnyfugger:
yes I like this imagery and this rythme:

"my brothers bred in violence,
my sisters swallowed swords,
I just laid in paint and uttered nonsense words"

wonderful

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"No time for the old in and out; I've just come to read your meter"
:iconshadownewmoon:
thank you :D

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B: Is it raining?
A: I think they're spitting at us.

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